Her name was Julie she had mixed personalities one day she's happy then she's mad at me. We found love in 1942 she straight up just came out the loo, She knew i loved it when i was next to her, the feelings that i had for her was true she just didnt let me cater to her.Then she tried to put me in the friendzone, i was in that friendzone until i fell for her.Then i popped out at her party i was with the gang and it was a robbery so they tucked their chains.
She saw money all around me, i looked like im the man, i was counting it all just last week. She just turned up she wouldn't tell me where she had been, So My chains got bigger so my chains got bigger.
i didn't mean to kill her she just caught me by surprise, i reloaded my pistol, cocked it back and shot her twice. Her body dropped down to the floor and she had teardrops in her eyes, she grabbed me by my hands and said she was afraid to die, i told her it's to late my friend it is time to say goodbye and she died inside my arms blood all on her shirt. I seen her on the ground and was like hey julie heard you got that drip drip drip drip,She didn't say anything back so i gapped it from security.
Capital letters, JOrdan! Also, have a read of this out loud to figure out how it sounds and where punctuation ought to go.
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